Thursday, March 17, 2011

the essential death

I really should be cramming for my foreign language test tomorrow. Well, I'm not. I have no idea about this story. It popped up into my head. I came up with names. Oh yay, we have a few lines of dialog and a weird and ambiguous opening paragraph.
Now time for ever boring premises of the story. the girl might be a vampire. she might be a normal teenage girl. maybe a girl that was kidnapped? She could be the sparkling tooth fairy held captive for all I know. If you've bothered to read my other stories, you know that my opening are confusing and just plain open ended. Like a suckish opening cliffhanger in a way?
Oh, and I know this is flooded with sentence fragments. Yays!
The whole random thing about Bryce and Blythe, something dumb that came up in my head. And no, before you call me one of the most predictable wannabe authoresses out there, Blythe did not kill Bryce. One of the things I hate being is predictable. Especially when story writing. So this story might not make any sense to you, and  I should probably be studying instead of typing this intro you're probably going to skip, and just study for my test. Wow, there are a lot of run-ons and fragments in this stupid thing. Well, nonetheless, onto the story-ish:
the essential death

(random A/N: Wow I come up with weird philosophical and depressing titles for my stories)


There was a thick tension in the air; something you couldn’t penetrate. The air was like a wall standing before them, but just there. One could find it hard to breathe in such a place, as the air held words of malice, strung into something so essential for life. But that something so essential can kill you.


          “A small price to pay for a favor, Sophorina,” He tapped this finger against the chair, every period between seeming like another era.

          “What can you possibly do?”The words stated, dutifully.
          “There is one thing,” He looked up, revealing calm, yet eerie eyes, eyes that scared you to whim. The kind of eyes that can kill you. The kind of eyes about to kill you. “Kill him.” Those words were said lightly, perhaps nonchalantly, but they tortured 
a person until the last syllable was said and done.


~Chapter One~
“We are all here today to mourn the death of Bryce Kenward. We are all deeply saddened by this death. May he rest in peace,”

Blythe’s hat covered most of her face, an egotistic smirk placed onto it. So he was really dead? She removed her gloves and made her way to the casket.
 

Friday, March 4, 2011

Thruths and Dares: Writing this was like a failed dare to myself

Truth or Dare? 
This game played by so many can also be so dangerous. I never like the game myself - it was overrated and predictable. 
So writing this - no reading this is hilarious. It's like a twisted love thingy that glee uses way too often. And so, let the wincing and eye rolling commence: Do you dare to read it?


Popcorn spilled everywhere. Pillows were scattered. Phones were in hands. Texts were connected from one phone to the other.

Janelle: yea. Sure.. wanna crash the sleep ova?
Alex: mayb. Matt mite com
Janelle: uh-huh.. erica n lucia wants 2 play truth or dare. Wat do u think?
Alex: do u want eric 2 com?
Janelle: who's wit u rite now
Alex: matt, eric, jas, derek, marc, steve. drew
Janelle: ya.. jus take them 2 e's.
Alex: parents?
Janelle: out... where like 12.. no duh.. bsides, melly and jare r here. So's most of the teens. The r babysittin us.
Alex: c u in a few

“They're coming,” Janelle announced.
“Awesome” Tiff held out a poland spring bottle. “Remeber nothing disgusting. A.K.A PG13. Though not too G. Don't make one of the teens to come and monitor,”
“So should we get another bag of popcorn going? Extra butter and sweet?” Erica inquired.
“Go ahead. Plug in your iPod Rebecca. Truth or Dare playlist.” Janelle said. The doorbell rang.
“Could you get that Serena?” Tiffay said and set the bottle in the middle of the short table that was surrounded by level beanbags.
Serena walked into the hall. Erica came in with a few more bowls of popcorn. Alex, Matt, Eric, Jason, and Derek came in. The seating chart, was placed in no suggestive order. But as you people know, henious love triangles, (or squares) are in existence in high school. It's even harder when friendship and secrets linger.

The BREAKDOWN:

Love Shapes (Hexagons, Pentagons, Squares, Triangles):

Alex and Janelle are '<3'
Eric 'likes' Janelle.
Lucia 'likes' Eric
Eric 'somewhat likes' Lucia
Lucia is 'best friends' with Erica
Erica are Eric's 'siblings/twins'
Erica 'appears' to have a crush on Bryant
Bryant is 'best friends' with Eric
Rebecca and Andrew 'like no one'
Marcus and Tiffany are '<3'
Melissa and Marcus are 'siblings'
Melissa likes Andrew
Andrew is long time best friends with Serena
Serena has dated everyone but Derek and Andrew
Derek likes Melissa